Rotten

[entipy]

don't speak to me
your tongue is rotten with foul lies
for years i've felt that sting and still i hoped
still i believed

don't tell me you will
your soul is void and my heart is scathed
it's too late for more hollow promises
i don't believe you anymore

don't say it's me
your actions betray your purpose
there is one thing you devote your attention to
that's yourself

don't come back

just leave me alone...


11 August 2005

[Diva]

I love this one! It's so powerful and filled with emotion. *hugs*

[entipy]

/me hugs Diva
:)

[Bassmama]

AWESOME!!! TO THE POINT!!!!! VERY WELL WRITTEN!!!!!

I think I'm goping to copy it & send it to my ex... it fits him to a "T"

/me stands & applauds!

[entipy]

/me bows

Thank you, thank you. ;)

[Bones]

/me hoists beer and lighter.

Good one Entipy.