A new song I've written called "Enemy"

[MtlguitarJames]

This is one of those songs that doesn't have the title in the song. I'm pretty sure you'll understand what it means though.

"ENEMY"

I feel an emptiness in my life,
a void so deep nothing can suffice.

Where will I stand in 20 years,
when is it time to face these fears.

Losing control of my sanity
searching for pills in the vanity

As I sit here in pain,
I start to wonder am I insane?
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Who is wrong and who is right,
it is this that makes us fight.
CHORUS #1

Animosity and hate,

these are things that you create.

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Father Father tell me the truth,
How can you lie when I have this proof

I feel so empty and hollow,
no where to go no one to follow

All of this will take it’s toll
Nothing is left in my soul

You take away my sight
leave me blind in a fight
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Open your eyes and see what’s new,
nothing is right and nothing is true.
CHORUS #2

Enter my world and you will see,
nothing is what it seems to be.
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I feel an emptiness in my life,
a void so deep nothing can suffice.

Where will I stand in 20 years,
when is it time to face these fears.

[Thaum1el]

Do you have a score?

[Bassmama]

I'm impressed! VERY good!

[Unforgiven]

Do you have a score?

I'd give it 8/10.

:cheesy:

[Thaum1el]

I'm thinking more, notes of the melody and the chord progression.