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MtlguitarJames
07-20-04, 01:05PM
I wrote this about 7 months ago. I write alot but rarely share with anyone including my wife. But I feel like sharing this time so here it goes.

Wasting Time

All I can think about is wasting time,
minutes, hours, and days just going by.

Slipping away so fast from my mind,
trying to get a grasp before I cry.

The days of yesterday are so far gone,
no longer able to be lived again.

Struck into the past... it feels so wrong,
bring it back so I can see my friend.

It was taken away from me so damn quick,
without even knowing it was even there.

Taken for granted memories too thick,
too late to enjoy and too late to care.

I'm Wasting time...........
I'm Wasting time...........

Rebuilding my life from what it used to be
a new begining is taking it's toll.

I'm trying to re-gain my ability to see,
the pain inside is beyond my control.

Take away the hurt and let this heal,
sew me up yet the scars never fade.

Holding it back I will not reveal,
the way of life of being afraid.

The years have passed and things have changed,
the past is gone...there's no turning back.

My life is now and it can't be exchanged,
even though my control is what I lack.

I'm Wasting time............
I'm Wasting time............
Diva
07-20-04, 03:36PM
Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading this. :)

Take away the hurt and let this heal,
sew me up yet the scars never fade.

So true.....
whitecrow
07-20-04, 04:50PM
thank you for sharing that... it rings true with me, too.
MtlguitarJames
07-20-04, 06:45PM
You all are very welcome. Thankyou for reading it. I think the main reason why I don't share alot is because people don't read alot. Thank you for your feedback. I was thinking about turning it into a song. I've been playing guitar for 7 1/2 years
whitecrow
07-20-04, 07:26PM
Why don't you do just that? What style were you thinking of?
Fire
07-21-04, 01:35AM
You should turn it into a song!

And guys...He's really good on the guitar. I'm serious.
MtlguitarJames
07-21-04, 11:21AM
I was thinking of something melodic but heavy. I've got an Idea! I can record it to an mp3. I've got the software to do it. Hmmmmm. Just need to find a way to post it if someone can host it. Hmmm. That rhymes. lol.
Diva
07-21-04, 11:40AM
I can link it here... Just dont send it around. I'd love to hear it. :D

PS: you should check your PMs :p
MtlguitarJames
07-21-04, 01:00PM
I checked my pms. I've been a little lazy. But I have to wait for my wife to wake up so I can record the music. She'll kick my ass if I just start blaring my guitar. lol. As would anyone else that's trying to sleep peacefully. :P But I will record it sometime TODAY. :D
Diva
07-21-04, 01:22PM
Check out Fire's gallery for photos of his better half. I resized them the other day. ;)
warza bidul
07-21-04, 05:20PM
I'm wasting my time, got nothing to do... sounds like Lemon Tree by Fool's garden to me

p.s. didn't read the other posts.
MtlguitarJames
07-27-04, 04:16PM
I haven't had time to record latley. I got a new job and am trying to find the time to do it. I'll probably do it tomorrow. No matter how long it takes I will get it done!
Bassmama
07-27-04, 08:17PM
I've read this about four times- boy, can I identify with it. You been looking into my life?

Excellent!
MtlguitarJames
07-28-04, 01:54AM
I've read this about four times- boy, can I identify with it. You been looking into my life?

Excellent!

Thanx for the compliment Bassmama. It means alot. It's nice to know that someone understands my writings. You guys rock.
Fire
07-28-04, 04:42AM
Check out Fire's gallery for photos of his better half. I resized them the other day. ;)

Thanks...!! They're all wierd sizes...sorry...!!

I'll get on James about recording that song...he's a little slow......
Diva
07-28-04, 09:11AM
That's cool. Congrats on the new job!
MtlguitarJames
08-03-04, 04:15AM
HAHAHA!!! I'm workin on it...just been really busy lately!!
MtlguitarJames
08-24-04, 12:34AM
...still tryin'!
[uBer]
08-24-04, 12:57PM
hi....i love your writing.. you should let us read more... i sw your photos and noticed you play a guitar.. very nice. how long have you been playing....what music are you into? soon ill post some of my writing up...hope to seee more
MtlguitarJames
09-26-04, 01:59PM
I have still yet to record anything. I've just been so busy latley. I hate it. I wish I could just get the time to do it. Maybe one day we can just get all the musicians and writers together here and have a NoChickTrix Fest. Like a concert! Now that's an Idea! :)
DJ Malkav
09-29-04, 04:58PM
hmm that would be fun, get out the turntables and drum coumputer hmm havn't a made a song in a long time, just got back into it since i moved back.