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jellybean
01-25-02, 11:29PM
I sit here and daze,
My mind in a haze,
Feeling supressed,
I can't rest,
Eyes open wide,
Can't find myself inside,
This sucks bad,
Hate being sad,
I swam last night,
Water was cold,
Heart was stone,
A good match,
My mind detached,
Another day,
Not knowing what to say..


:c: Jellybean 2002

Jake
01-26-02, 01:14PM
That's a mighty sad poem you have there, jellybean. I enjoyed it all the same. Good to see you posting.

Diva
01-26-02, 01:29PM
Hey JB!!!!! I love the poem. And the avatar! I'm so glad to see you here.

jellybean
01-26-02, 11:32PM
Hi Diva !! can you tell I wasn't having a good night :( but on a positive note here is a more happier poem, I try to write two or three a week I'll make a effort to post them here....

Jake, Glad you enjoyed the poem, I kinda think of it as art and placing feelings on paper instead of images..... plus writers live longer.

"Another day..."

Today was a good day,
the sun was out and I wanted to play,
so I looked outside,
and to my surprise,
the sun said,
you cooped up inside,
come to lunch and see me,
so I make your dreams a reality,
take your lunch and go to the beach,
enjoy me while I shine for tonight,
the moon takes over the light...