Hell

[entipy]

I posted a link to this over here (http://www.nochicktrix.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=6513) , but I thought I'd post the poem under this proper thread.

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Hell


Then the crying starts
Your knees pull up into your chest
The sobs wrench themselves from your lungs
Your body writhes where it collapsed on the floor

The pain starts in your belly...
A hot ball which radiates throughout your torso,
spreading down your arms and legs
It turns your fingers into claws
Grasping, tearing, soul-ripping claws

It surrounds your brain and squeezes
This makes the tears ooze
And then fall
Dripping into the carpet
Streaking your swiping fingers
This is not soul-cleansing
This is hell


13 March 1998 - copyright JMI

[Lilith]

Ouch. This is powerful and painful and razor-edged. You can't "like" something like this, but it certainly makes a statement--and an impression.

* Lilith hugs enty

[entipy]

* entipy hugs Lil

Thanks

[Bassmama]

Yup- you've been there. Been there many times myself- I recognize the place.

That's one of the best descriptions of depression I've heard.

I wrap you with my soul to keep you warm & comfort you!

[entipy]

* entipy hugs Bassmama

[MtlguitarJames]

Wow!

[entipy]

Is that a good wow or a bad wow? ;)

[MtlguitarJames]

a good wow...i've been there....

[entipy]

Ok. I'm sorry for anyone who's been there. *hugs*

[MtlguitarJames]

I suppose the fact that I made it through it is what matters!! *hugs back*

[entipy]

Very true, James. Very true! :)

[MtlguitarJames]

:)