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thestarsfall
04-12-04, 02:40PM
My only wish
Is that you were here
Far away you slay me
Burdening my heart
I dream of you
My only escape
For my heart aches
Remembering your touch
Caressing my skin
My cares were light

I crave the sleep
Which brings me closer
Closer to you in my dreams

whitecrow
04-12-04, 04:45PM
This is achingly beautiful. The tearing dichotomy of it is wonderful.

Diva
04-12-04, 06:07PM
Twitch, I really like this! :)

thestarsfall
04-12-04, 08:05PM
Originally posted by whitecrow
This is achingly beautiful. The tearing dichotomy of it is wonderful.

woah whitecrow....youre using big words....heh

Lilith
04-12-04, 08:39PM
Twitch, it's beautiful. Is it written for someone in particular or a dream-person you wish existed? It could be read either way.

entipy
04-13-04, 07:23AM
Twitch - very moving!

thestarsfall
04-13-04, 02:02PM
Originally posted by Lilith
Twitch, it's beautiful. Is it written for someone in particular or a dream-person you wish existed? It could be read either way.

a little from column a....a little from column b....

....i forget what exactly i wrote it about but there is someone it could fit in real life....