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DJ Malkav
03-19-03, 10:06AM
Enveloped in a sentiment,
A sound that rushes over me.
Engage an impulse to pretend
I have a faith as pure.
Not forgetting what it means to dream.
Indulging everything.
Entertaining thoughts that I've the strength
Of those I yearn to be.
Cheers and tribute greet the saviours.
Reckless thoughts survive.
Anachronistic and impulsive.

And what will happen?
Will I dream?
I am too scared to close my eyes.
For a second please hold me.
None can change in me these things that I believe.
But I don't know what happens now.
I am too scared to close my eyes.

Diva
03-19-03, 07:28PM
This is wonderful. Very intense. :)

DJ Malkav
03-19-03, 09:19PM
thank you

chica
03-19-03, 09:43PM
that poem was beautiful, it somehow gave a renassaince feel. i also like ur choice of words.

Jake
03-27-03, 11:57AM
Another great poem, DJ. :)

kittyroze
05-05-03, 10:37AM
I really like this one DJ, keep up the awesome work :)

Boozer
05-06-03, 07:53PM
Very nice. Very powerful, in a way. I like it.