one of my poems

[LucifersChild]

*SELF-SCARIFICATION*
you took me completely
made me surrender
to feelings ive never felt before
pleasure and pain become one
as our bodies entertwine
energies expended
both mental and physical
as i slowly melt into nothingness
an endless sea of dispair you saw as you looked into my eyes
and felt my fear....
touched my pain
i am useless to you
never anything but used and abused
commiting self-scarification
everytime i spoke a word to you.....

well there it is, the first time ive made a poem public in a forum :) hope you guys like it

[Diva]

That was beautiful, Luc. Powerful.

[LucifersChild]

thanks diva.. wasnt real sure about posting it :(

[Jake]

That was real nice, Luci. Made me think of love and pain and how it plays a role for each of us. Molding us into who we are.

[LucifersChild]

thanks jake. and yepp, you hit it right on the head

[Amaurote]

Excellent as usual, Lucy; keep up the good work.