Insomnia

[Villager]

Alone in the silence of night,
Treacherous thoughts tear at the mind.
Darkness condemns all to obscurity,
As pain carves its hollow face.

Paralysed by the voice of whispers,
The eternal echo of damnation.
Sleep can promise no reprieve,
My nights a sharper hell than day.

The sun forces its piercing gaze,
Light invades all it sees.
My eyes naked and ablaze,
I am woken from the shadows.

[Diva]

I really like this one. I've lived this one. You never cease to amaze me. :)

even if you are a major pain in the ass.

[Jake]

Great poem, Vill. You know how much I enjoy your writings. Keep em coming! :)

[Andie]

You got some serious talent Vill...
*crowd goes wild*
More..:)

[Gracie]

Wouldnt it be nice if we could all write this way without the inspiration? Very well done and keep them coming!

[Villager]

Originally posted by Gracie
Wouldnt it be nice if we could all write this way without the inspiration? Very well done and keep them coming!

Don't be silly, they're just words. Everyone here can type. Sit down, think about something, and then pick a way of writing about it. That's all I do..

[Diva]

Originally posted by Villager
Don't be silly, they're just words. Everyone here can type. Sit down, think about something, and then pick a way of writing about it. That's all I do..

So, you're saying that you don't have any trouble sleeping, Vill? :p