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[thestarsfall]

/divided within\
/between good and evil\
/light and dark\
/truth and lies\

/filling up my head\
/thru my body\
/out of my mouth\
/and down my cheeks as tears\

/anger and hate\
/welled up inside\
/no escape\
/the pain is too much\

/release is far\
/i am unable to see it\
/blinded by my emotions\
/caught up in the moment\

/in a perfect world\
/things would be right\
/but life is far from perfect\
/or what i want as perfect\

/love is futile\
/love is a waste\
/yet all things come back to love\
/we were created in love\

/and in love we die\

[Diva]

Twitch, this is beautiful. So deep. You are very talented.

[thestarsfall]

i find it amusing that my most artistic stuff comes from like 2 minutes of work when im in a certain mood and then i try hard on something it doesnt work out at all...i also find it amusing/ironic (as i was saying to one of my friends) that some of the most beautiful artwork and literature comes from ppl who wrote during the most ugly depressing times in their lives

[Jake]

That's a great poem, Twitch. Somber and yet touching. I look forward to reading more. :)

[Andie]

Very nice Twitch!!
Looks like another fine addition to the Writers Corner...
More, more.:D

[Gracie]

This is a great piece twitch..... look forward to more :)