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lostpoet
01-30-07, 11:17AM
..tonight..
I want to know more of you,
want to get close to you,
want to hold on to you,
want you holding on to me too.
I want to know what others don't,
want to show what others tried,
want to succeed where they failed,
want us to have never lied.
I want to hear your laugh,
want to see your passions glow,
want to taste your scent,
so much of you I want to know.
I want to kiss you in ways soft and kind, want it to be hot and sweaty so,
want to know you deep inside,
want to hold you warm,in the afterglow.
I know that I will .
I will hold you tight
we will make love all night,
exploding in a blinding light,
I know that I will search and find,
how and where to light your fires,
stay your wants
heat you up,
trace ice and cool you down,
make a torch of your desires.
I want to hear you laugh out loud,
want to fall deep into that sound,
want you able to tell me if ever you should cry, want to be able to ask and be told why.
I want to be inside of you,.tonight..
want us wrapped around each other tight,
want us slick with each others scent,
want us finding places that we never went.
I want us doing this together,
sharing this forever,
never asking for too much,
just us having each others touch.
...tonight.....
lostpoet..1/30/07

warza bidul
01-31-07, 06:34AM
and there's a poem of passion and one or two lines made me laugh.

NurseNancy
01-31-07, 06:42AM
there's a poem of passion

mmmmmmmmmm...passion...*wistful sigh*

wonderful, wonderful, wonderful poem!!!!!!!!!!

Bones
02-01-07, 01:36AM
Excellent.

NurseNancy
02-01-07, 03:45PM
*sighs*

just wanted to read the poem again:love: This could possibly be my fav so far.

lostpoet
02-05-07, 09:24AM
thanks to all,."sighs"..admitted passion,.laughter,.love,. and an excellent by a great writer,. we all want word our words to touch people in whatever ways they need to be seen or felt,.makes it worthwhile, not to be read but for the reader to feel..thanks again, to all ,.. lostpoet

lostpoet
02-05-07, 09:33AM
thanks to all,."sighs".."admitted passion",."laughter",."love",. and an "excellent" comment given by a great writer,. we all want our words to touch people, in whatever ways they need to be seen or felt by them,.makes it worthwhile, not to be read but for the reader to have felt something..thanks again, to all,for sharing your thoughts,.. lostpoet

lostpoet
02-05-07, 09:41AM
lol got cut off and it all shows up twice,..third times hopefully not the charm..an admitted oops,.

NurseNancy
02-06-07, 03:45AM
lol got cut off and it all shows up twice,..third times hopefully not the charm..an admitted oops,.

hahahahahaha...dork :moon: