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Bones
01-15-07, 04:51PM
Glistening
Frozen Rain
Beautiful

The street lights
Gleam
Off of its
Sheen

Iridescent

Like an opal
Falling
From
The sky

Frozen
Water stones
With a tigers eyes

Show their danger
But so beautiful
otherwise.

I sit and wait
For the winters freeze

lostpoet
01-18-07, 05:21AM
Go Bones,..this may be my favorite that you have written,at least as far as my memory serves,.loved the way you used so many symbolisms to express your point of view,all quite accurate also,a poem and view that anyone can see ..keep up the good work