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Bones
12-16-06, 08:39PM
Thanks for dropping by
Even Though
My lifes against the grain

Etched in stone
My face is etched in stone

Look at evil deeds

As they drag me down

Etched in stone
My deeds are etched in stone

Etched in stone

Hear the silence as it falls down.
Hear it all around

I wish I could spare the pain.
But
It's etched in stone

Always be alone
As my face is etched in stone
My way is etched in stone

Live as stone
Hold back
From breaking out of the stone

My heart is a stone.

MY life is etched in stone
My past is etched in stone.

Diva
12-17-06, 08:52PM
*hugs* Very powerful, Bones.

Bones
12-18-06, 09:53AM
Thank you. This one was hard to write and to post. And hard to reply to. I came very close to not posting it. The guy I started this with was one of the best friends I ever had.
It's something my friend and I started working on a long time ago. We only got the first three lines done. Then he passed away. I thought it was time to finish it. I think he would like the end result.

NurseNancy
12-20-06, 04:25AM
Thanks for dropping by
Even Though
My lifes against the grain

THAT is my favorite, favorite part - I have felt that way many times. Awesome, yet sad poem. Two thumbs up!

Bones
12-20-06, 06:20AM
THAT is my favorite, favorite part - I have felt that way many times. Awesome, yet sad poem. Two thumbs up!

My favorite part also. I miss that dude so much. He's the only person I cared about more than you outside of my family. And the only person besides your sister I could write with. I had to finish this one.

lostpoet
01-03-07, 01:29PM
super strong words bones,..brought many images and thoughts to my head,.you're good..keep itup....were some Great lines in this one..

Bones
03-27-08, 02:57AM
Break from the stone

Alive again

Frustrated

In Stone

But

Not

So

Cold

It's been

So many years now

Your Memory

Is still etched in stone

I miss you

My friend

You will never die

As
long
As
I keep you

Etched in memories
Etched in stone

(In memory of JP Lancaster. I miss you. And it's been a long time. I write cause you taught me to)